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Wow, I was not expecting that twist with the maybe-remote control! Casts a whole new light on the story so far! Great episode!

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Whole new light, pun intended? ;)

I’m so thrilled you’re enjoying it and that the twist was a surprise!

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What a fantastic fight scene! Those are some of my favorites, especially when they're vivid. You can feel the physicality and the confusion Cain's experience. I know she just killed someone, but I still feel for her, you know?

Amazing stuff!

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I agree about the remote control. The writing is vivid. Great action/killing scene!! I continue to dig this character and the world building... curious to see more.

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Is it weird if I keep saying I’m so glad you all like my killer cyborg girl? I don’t care, I’m so giddy this is working!! Great to hear the details of the fight scene worked for you instead of bogging down the pacing!

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Thank you for the kind words and feedback, Heather! Glad you enjoyed the killing scene ☠️😬Do let me know if Cain’s reaction to all this ever stresses her likability for you!

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